Review: Carnal Submission by Erotic Storm 3 of 5 stars

Carnal Submission by Erotic Storm
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

Adult content book - only 18+ readers.

Katie has been shielded by per parents for her whole life but when she is 18 she is left at home with another tutor for the holidays only to discover that it is not an elderly lady this time but an older man instead. Within hours of being introduced to him, she has her virginity taken by him as this experienced man starts to educate a naive, inexperienced woman. As part of that education, James takes Katie down the path of submission and BDSM. But what is the reasoning behind this decision by her parents?

This was an interesting start to the series where Katie and James meet and the journey of discovery starts. This is definitely a good example of erotic fiction and care should be taken over the audience for this on a mobile, computer or e-reader. Well written with very clear descriptions of the thoughts and motivations experienced by the two. It was an enjoyable story but a little brief in the exploration of motivation and agenda for both of them. I also found it a little concerning when James gave Katie alcoholic drinks considering how sheltered she was. Enjoyable but their journey has only just begun and I felt that the ending of this book was a little abrupt. Contains explicit sexual content.

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